Above is my revised magazine cover. In the critique I was told that my masthead was a little too close to my edges, so I made it smaller to reduce edge tension. I was also told that the picture of me kissing the dolphin was placed right in the middle of the page so it felt like it cut the magazine into to pieces. So I flipped the picture and moved it further down the page to use the Rule of Thirds. Then I just moved my text around the page to make them fit correctly around the moved image.
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